At least...
Fred talks about things the readers don't
know.
At least I feel I've been writing well. Sadly,
it's all fairly disjointed, as if I'm just trying to move from one scene to
another without connecting. I'll have to do that later. I wonder why I'm
hopping around. Is it because unlike most of the time, I've no beginning to
start from? That may be
it.
Considering starting with Atéo and Caroline (and Carl) out on an outing. This would hopefully establish a bond betwixt the two. I need to show Caroline, as well as the other Cayzans before anything can happen, I think. It's not as easy as ROLW where Parn had no obligations or ties. Also still puzzling out how well-off the Cayzans are. No farm stuff, right?
Considering starting with Atéo and Caroline (and Carl) out on an outing. This would hopefully establish a bond betwixt the two. I need to show Caroline, as well as the other Cayzans before anything can happen, I think. It's not as easy as ROLW where Parn had no obligations or ties. Also still puzzling out how well-off the Cayzans are. No farm stuff, right?
Posted: 水 - 11月 19, 2003 at 01:40 午後
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